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Post by mantiaras on Jan 26, 2013 18:18:40 GMT -5
name ;; Lucy von Wade nicknames ;; Lucky Lucy gender ;; Female age;; 15 job ;; Astore Mist Guardian origin ;; Germany affiliation ;; Astore Family first impression ;; The odd color of her eyes, as well as the makeup she wears upon her porcelain skin – that of a card symbol. Another thing that pops out is her necessary want to carry around her flute everywhere. body build ;; An average body build, except she has thinner arms and broader shoulders attire ;; She often wears an odd attire of well-fitted shirts and pants, with ruffles located around the shoulders and waist. Her shoes are lace-up boots that end halfway up her calves. She wears white gloves. personality ;; Quiet: She is often reserved to herself, but when participating in a conversation she would occasionally giggle as a response to what someone may say. Once she is capable of opening up to a person, she becomes a bit more talkative than around other people. However, she does not open often.
Playful: Whenever she is in the heat of battle, her playful nature easily breaks out. She will toy with the opposing member or even her victim for as long as possible. She will enjoy quite a lot to sadistically tear them a part slowly. On a normal basis, her childish nature is quite imminent and she has said multiple times to many people that “growing up” will become too boring for her to handle.
Intelligent: Before she completely throws herself into a situation, she will quickly evaluate not only her surroundings but the people involved in the situation as well. She pays close attention to details, no matter what the detail may be.
Competitive: She enjoys taking every moment she gets to play a game. Unfortunately, when she loses such games she is unable to truly accept the fact. She hates losing, more than anything in the world, and it gets her extremely aggravated in a very short amount of time. This is a fault that has once cost her, her very life.
Aggravated-Easily: She has quite a high tolerance for the majority of the time, but she will occasionally meet a person who completely annoys her to no end. This will get her aggravated quickly, and possibly even drive her into a blind rage. She tries to hide this fact behind her quiet nature, and try to appear as if nothing affects here when it honestly does.
strengths ;; Lucy is a very agile person that is quickly able to dodge attacks. A lot of the time, when she gets hit it is because she willed it to happen – she allowed whatever it was to hit her. This is only for the fun of the game, and to keep a battle going on longer.
She pays a great amount of detail, and is capable of working within any environment. Her intelligence allows her to think up a plan for a situation very quickly, in order to win.
weaknesses;; Due to her history that weakened and then strengthened her, she often comes near the point of losing her mind. When she reaches this point, she is unable to control herself and has asked a select few to stop her at this point.
One of her weaknesses is an actual fear, that developed when she discovered her mother. She hates seeing her own blood, as it reminds her of the blood she saw dripping out of her mother’s throat.
history;; Lucy was a girl who grew up in quite the peaceful family. Her father was very strict however. He taught her the various fighting methods that his own father taught him, as he was forced into the Second World War. She lived in Germany for a few years of her life, before something within her father had snapped and he attempted to kill not only Lucy’s mother, but Lucy herself. The two fled to another foreign country in order to get away.
Lucy’s mother had taken her to Italy, in order to begin a new life. It was extremely hard for the girl to adapt, and she quickly developed her introverted nature. She picked up on the language very slowly, and had to deal with an amount of bullying as she grew up. Once she finally had a very decent grasp on the language, she met a peculiar male.
Lucy had wandered away from her mother one day, as they were out in the markets shopping. She had a tight grasp on her dear flute, as she wandered down the street and turned around the nearest corner. Within due time however, she found herself lost in a very bad area. People easily picked up on the fear that quivered within her, and she was almost mugged for her flute. Screeching as loud as she could, she was shoved within an alley. She was completely defenseless, and forgot everything that her father ever taught her. Her mother would be unable to help, as she was too far away. That was when he appeared. His name was Alex, and he quickly took care of the gang, helping the girl escape and returning her flute to her. But, instead of being thankful, she punched him. Shocked, the two shortly became friends after, as they were both drawn to their odd natures.
When Lucy backtracked to where she last saw her mom however, she noticed she was no longer there. Asking around the various shopkeepers as to if they saw her mother, they all told her they were not sure. Lucy simply returned home. What she returned home to however, was not something she actually expected.
The front door was ajar only slightly, with a bit of wind whistling inside. Pushing it open, Lucy wandered in to only see how dark it was. She called out to her mom a few times, and got no answer in return. As she wandered up to her mother’s room, her cries were choked in her throat. She could no longer breathe. There, on her bed, was her mother. Her throat was slit, her clothes ripped from violation, and the murder weapon was placed within her own hands. Lucy had no idea what to think, and from that day on she had to support herself, with the help of the few family friends her mother and herself had picked up over the years since coming to Italy.
From that day on, she developed her sickly nature of slight insanity and became a much harder, colder person. Once she had heard that her old friend, Alex, had wandered off to Japan she decided to follow after him in order to have a fun little game.
dying will flame ;; Mist flames Box Weapon ;;
name ; Nebbia de Ketze - Mist Cat type ; Animal - Mist description ; A cat-like figure that has a peculiar darkness roaming about it, like that of shadows – one could say that the cat is made of the actual shadows. It was bright blue eyes that seem to pierce one’s soul. It is very light on its feet, and makes absolutely no sound, except for the occasional sigh.
Passive – Mist Maker: Constantly emits mist flames
Devour of the Darkness: Completely envelops and devours the victim within itself, sending it into an illusion of darkness to be destroyed within.
Area Possession: Seems to become the actual mist flames, however the animal has only a short amount of time to maneuver before having to return to its box.
weapons and items;;
Flute: A musical instrument that was passed down to her
Cards: These can often be used as a knife object
Astore Mist Ring
special attacks ;;
52 tot umfallen [Drop-dead]: This is a move that uses her hidden deck of cards. They are precious, and have razor-sharp edges that can cut through the majority of items and surfaces.
Melodie of Insanity: This involves her playing her flute. She plays specific tunes in order to summon her various illusions, and control them from afar or nearby.
Screeching Riot: She will either summon an illusion to create a very loud sound, or she shall play her flute to make a loud screech in order to disorient her opponent, cause them harm within their skull, and even attempt to burst their eardrums.
Nightmare Zeit [Time]: She will create the illusion that she has become the opponent’s absolute worst fear or nightmare.
physical stats ;;
strength ; 6 agility ; 9 wisdom ; 10
flame stats ;;
purity ; 9 control/ability ; 9 strength ; 7
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There was no way, in absolute hell that this male would be traveling today.
The warm fire crackled delightfully in his ears, drawing him closer and closer as the moments went on by. His body absorbing all of the heat and protecting him for the horrors of the cold that lingered outside. His whole family was gone, either about on their own business, or they had already moved out - his younger sibling had decided that she absolutely hated the home, and called them all disgraces before stalking out of the house, never to be seen again. It wasn't every day that you came across a hunter family, one that specialized in such a sport.
It was also not often that someone in such a family also got the blues. The feeling of being completely depressed, and utterly lazy. To just lie around for hours, which would soon turn into days and do absolutely nothing productive. Rafe often didn't get like this. He was either prowling the forest, taking a walk, doing the chores for his dear mother or even just cutting up wood because he felt like it. He was always working his muscles, exercising, and trying to improve on his aim. It was always good to try and improve, since one could never be too sure about what may occur in the future. However, on this particular day Rafe felt like doing absolutely nothing. And he could feel the emotions stirring within his body, tearing at his chest uneasily.
He didn't enjoy this feeling. It made him wince every now and again, and it hurt to feel such a way. He couldn't think of any logical explanation as to why he felt as such . .Sighing, he slowly lifted his heavy head off of the pillow. His bare chest was splotched red in places, because of him getting too close to the fire at times. Reaching over, he grabbed the fire poker and poked at the wood for a moment before becoming bored of even doing that. He was always fascinated with the way the embers fell and how the flames grew suddenly before dying down once more.
Breathing deeply, Rafe cleared his throat when he heard a soft click. His father slowly roamed into the living room, holding a paper bag. His gun smacked against his thigh, causing Rafe to tsk at him softly, with a playful grin. It seemed the male was coming out of his shell each and every day. He had developed a true personality, which was somewhat different from when he was a child. He was now a bit more mischevious, playful even. He enjoyed being active, but he still didn't talk much. The relationship between his father and himself had also grown over the years, which made the male happy. "Why are you just lying around, Rafe?" His father said, in response to his noises of disagreement. The grin was wiped off his face. Shaking his head, he brushed his fingers through his messy locks, before slowly getting up. The blanket still wrapped around his broad shoulders.
"I don't feel like doing anything today, that's why." Rafe retorted easily, sliding on his T-shirt and sweater. It was a bit baggy on his frame, but not by much. It was on of his favorite. It was bought and tailored specially for him, as it had pockets within to hide his guns and even ammo. His father shook his head.
"Go out and do something. I don't want to see you lying around," his father ordered and reluctantly, Rafe left the house. Slipping on his boots, and roaming off into the forest. Soon he came to the outskirts, hearing the bustle of the nearest town off ahead. I wonder what kind of day it'll be today. . Rafe thought to himself, rubbing at his eyes delicately. They were still sore from sleep.
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Post by Cecoil on Jan 26, 2013 18:51:19 GMT -5
Well, yanno what? I think I may just get rid of the complicated application format altogether. e.e Anyways, I'll be checking over your application today. Just sort of skimming it I can tell Shiro wasn't kidding with what he said :3
Everything about the appearance and personality is absolutely wonderful. Wonderful in the very, very atttractive 'good grammar, impeccable punctuation' sort of way, haha. Its content is also fan-freaking-tastic.:D
"... he quickly took care of the gang, helping the girl escape and returning her flute to her. But, instead of being thankful, she punched him. Shocked, the two shortly became friends after, as they were both drawn to their odd natures."
There's absolutely nothing you need to change there, haha. I just found that funny and wanted to point that out. Sorry, lol, I like to share my thoughts on applications.
Your special attacks are good to go, and I especially like how you described the cat. I absolutely hate cats, but you did a good job in making it seem artful, haha.
The thing with the stats is every character starts with the twenty. Then, they have the option of auditioning for a Guardian spot, or whatever. It's rather obvious that you're going to be Alexander's Mist Guardian so, while I have absolutely no doubt you'll pass your audition, you'll have to adjust the stats for now until Sky judges your audition. Sorry for the inconvenience~
Lastly, you'll need a RP sample. You can just throw it at the end of your application. Any RP post that you've done in the past that is about your average posting length will be acceptable, it doesn't necessarily have to be about your character.
Alright, all finished. Great job, Manny:D And if you're wondering how Sky is going to do the audition, I've got no idea .___. Sorry, lol, I usually let him handle that stuff. Just PM him, saying that you're going to be auditioning for the Astore Mist Guardian spot, and he'll tell you to do something or other, haha. Anyways, questions, comments, concerns, whatever, can be said in a responding post, the c-box, or in a PM, wherever you're comfortable asking, really.
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Post by Cecoil on Jan 28, 2013 7:30:09 GMT -5
Uhm, well, me being the forgetful person I am, I forgot to be all official and accept this. Sky will unlock this for you and stuff whenever you pass the audition to add in your stat points. Or, at least, he should XP Oh, and I hope you don't mind I took out your character's position in the title. I didn't have enough room to write the class in >.< EXPERIENCE POINTS : 3,000 [/size] [STYLE=border: 1px dotted #a7a7a7; text-align: center; font-family: arial; font-size: 9px; padding: 10px; float: left; width: 400px; height: 20px; margin-top: 10px; margin-left: 10px; margin-bottom: 10px; color: #222222; border-radius: 30px 30px 30px 30px; color: #EBEBEB;] [STYLE=border-bottom: 2px dashed #f9362f; color: #EBEBEB; font-size: 44px; text-transform: uppercase; letter-spacing: -1px; font-weight: bold; font-family: System; line-height: 11px; text-align: center; width: 403px; margin-top: -16px; padding-right: 12px; text-shadow: #080808 8px 1px 1px;]Accepted[/style] [STYLE= font-size: 30px; text-transform: uppercase; letter-spacing: -1px; font-weight: bold; font-family: System; line-height: 11px; text-align: right; width: 403px; margin-top: -16px; padding-right: 12px; text-shadow: #080808 5px 1px 1px;] Welcome to V W![/style][/style]
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